Story For English Class

[HerLoss]

[GameClaw_268]

Gruesome... you should right a sequel: Revenge of the dogs, or something like that. Squerrels, who would have thought...

[awesomegamer]

great plot and interesting

you get a good grade?

[HerLoss]

best grade I've got in that class. 94. but its not like I tried or even passed in any of the other projects. lol

[awesomegamer]

yeah, well i definately would like to see more

[HerLoss]

Well I'll probobly add onto this one for the final draft. I kinda half assed the ending just to end it if it wasnt obvious... lol.

[awesomegamer]

well just like movies you could have the "extended version" or "Alternate endings"... some bloopers would be nice, lol

[majazac]

really good... I'm a writer (or trying to be) to. Really nice... I noticed that the end was too quick for the rest of the story... I liked AG's idea... Extended version or alternate endings.. you should definitly keep going

[HerLoss]

really good... I'm a writer (or trying to be) to. Really nice... I noticed that the end was too quick for the rest of the story... I liked AG's idea... Extended version or alternate endings.. you should definitly keep going

Definitly will as soon as I stop being so lazy.

[majazac]

don't forget to send us the rest

[Quantum Media LLC]

great story. do you have the rest of it???? ever thought about being an author. let me know if you do i have a few contacts that i can hook you up with

[gma]

Wow, this was a really old topic. More description in the story would be nice. But the idea was pretty good. Kept me interested.

[AverageJoe]

I liked it!